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Visit to Chocolate Factory Fin by ~Roger64:iconRoger64:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Fantasy

©2008-2009 ~Roger64
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Update: I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT HIT DOWNLOAD TO SEE IT!

Kay I don't know why the first upload didn't put the text in. Hope it works now.

Yay! I've finally wrapped this up! I'd add more but it's been a lot of fun and I have to be leaving soon. I enjoyed writing this and am very proud of it. It all was going to be a simple one or two part story but I fell in love with the characters and made it longer. Hope you're happy with this.

Y'know I think made this Mr. Wonka about 1/3 Gene Wonka, 1/3 Depp Wonka, 1/3 Ozzmandias (Watchmen), and a tiny sprinkle of Downy Jr's Tonky Stark.

Enjoy!

Also based on the book and movies, book done by Rohal Dahl first.

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~Roger64 Jul 31, 2008, 2:05:34 PM
Why the hell isn't the story up there!?

I'll have to check it out later. Damn it!
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~Thundercracker417 Aug 1, 2008, 7:44:23 AM
...how do I put this...it was absolutely wonderful. Great job :)

Please infform me if there is a possibility of a sequel :), I would love to read it :)

Great job :)

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I'm Dirge in the G1 Crew on DA
I'm Darovit in the Jedi-VS-Sith-Club on DA
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~Thundercracker417 Aug 1, 2008, 7:49:11 AM
Also, I love the ending...especially about jr.

Jr's ending was hilarious :) I was laughing so hard while I read this chapter :) I was in hysterics at the end :)

Yay :)

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I'm Dirge in the G1 Crew on DA
I'm Darovit in the Jedi-VS-Sith-Club on DA
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~Roger64 Aug 1, 2008, 8:02:27 AM
Thank you. But I must ask, is the story coming out like one big long line format wise?
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~88jacks Aug 2, 2008, 7:31:46 AM
There should be a "Visit to Chocolate Factory 2" that's about the life Sr and Vio share together a couple of years later. And include what Jr might have for adventure in the factory with the girl at the end after his running the factory.
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~Roger64 Aug 3, 2008, 10:06:45 PM
Thank you! *scrolling down commets*

I guess I've redeemed those last two parts then?

Really? There weren't any rather touching parts likes Mike's ending or Veruca's?

A sequel is temping but I'm going to re-focus on what put me on the map for a while, Wonky stuff. I feel bad for neglecting it for so long.

Glad no one has raised an out cry over Jr's little ending which I see nothing wrong with.
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~Roger64 Aug 3, 2008, 10:07:12 PM
Again, sequel is tempting and I'm happy to see you comment.

You'll just have to see.
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